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This sample is a BIO for a San Francisco Comedian. He needed help with re-writing his biography.

Original (2010)

Larry Bubbles Brown is a San Francisco based comedian.

In the first grade he was watching clouds go by at recess and realized we were all going to die. This made him so depressed he just laid under the swings until the teachers came out and brought him back to class. He was sent home with a note.

Growing up in Ohio, he moved to California in his early 20's, seeking high rents and traffic.

After a series of Kafkaesque payroll jobs for the Federal government, he tried stand up at the Holy City Zoo in SF in l98l. In a few months he was making some money then rode the comedy boom of the 80's. That crashed in the 90's because as he points out - "Anything in life you like will be taken away from you."

Though the boom popped, Brown stayed at it because you can't beat working half an hour a night.

He spent two years working as a traffic reporter on Live l05 morning show with Alex Bennett. Best job, worst hours.

He has appeared on over 25 tv shows, including David Letterman and will be making another appearance this year. He was also in the movie "The Kiterunner." He appears in clubs mainly in California and Las Vegas because flying terrifies him even though he was a certified glider pilot before stand up.

He has been a frequent opening act for Dana Carvey and Dave Attell.

Hoping to someday start a vegetarian minimalist pessimist movement, his philosophy of life is "Expect the worst and you will never be disappointed."

What client wanted

   

Larry Brown is a San Francisco based comic who came up during the the 80's comedy boom that produced great comics like Robin Williams and Dana Carvey. He got stuck with the name Bubbles because he isn't.

Has appeared n a few movies, including The Kite Runner - "wish i was a better actor because movies have great food"

He is a frequent opener for Dana Carvey, Dave Attell, Rob Schneider, and Felipe Esparza.

Although the boom ended, Brown stayed at it because as he says, “you can't beat working half an hour a night”.

He has appeared on more than 25 tv shows, and holds the record for longest time between appearances by a comic on the David Letterman Show, and will be making another appearance this year.

He appears in clubs mainly in California and Las Vegas because flying terrifies him even though he was a certified glider pilot before stand up.

He was also in the movie "The Kiterunner", and numerous others. He wishes he were a better actor because he laments, “movies have better food.”

He is a frequent opener for Dana Carvey, Dave Attell, Rob Schneider, and Felipe Esparza.

Time for all to laugh again, let's get this pandemic over!!!

My re-write (2021)

   

Larry Bubbles Brown is a San Francisco based comic who flourished during the 80's comedy boom that produced great comics like Robin Williams and Dana Carvey. He got stuck with the nickname “Bubbles” because, well, he isn't.

In the first grade he was watching clouds go by at recess and realized we are all going to die. This made him so depressed he just lay under the swings until the teachers came out and brought him back to class. He was sent home with a note.

Having grown up in Ohio, he moved to California in his early 20's seeking high rents and traffic.

He spent two years working as a traffic reporter on Live l05 morning show with Alex Bennett. Best job, worst hours.

After a series of Kafkaesque payroll jobs for the Federal government, he tried stand up at the Holy City Zoo in SF in l98l. In a few months he was making some money then rode the comedy boom of the 80's. That comedy boom crashed in the 90's because as he points out, "Anything in life you like will be taken away from you.”

Although the boom ended, Brown stayed at it because as he says, “you can't beat working half an hour a night.”

He has appeared on more than 25 tv shows, and holds the record for longest time between appearances by a comic on the David Letterman Show, and will be making another appearance this year.

He appears in clubs mainly in California and Las Vegas because flying terrifies him even though he was a certified glider pilot before stand up.

He was also in the movie "The Kiterunner", and numerous others. He wishes he were a better actor because, he laments, “movies have better food.”

He is a frequent opener for Dana Carvey, Dave Attell, Rob Schneider, and Felipe Esparza.

He released his first CD in 2020: "It's gotta get better"

Can currently be heard on Dana Carvey's new podcast - Fantastic!

Bubbles says, Time for all to laugh again, let's get this pandemic over!!!